So I am a year 5 this is my first time doing winter it's fun but after the game my legs hurt.
One game someone in our team fell over when he kicked the ball .
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ReplyDeletethanks for telling the truth what can I do better
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DeleteHi Travis....thanks for sharing this post. It was great that you got faster as the season went on and hard when the opposite team takes the ball. I enjoyed watching you play each week. You showed great skill and perseverance. What other sports have you enjoyed playing?
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