writing wk 4&5

 This week for writing we have gotten comments on ours for help this was my comment.

I have add more to ideas, But I could not find a quote.  

Do you know anything that I could add ?

peace drawing

This week for reading we did peace drawing, I am strongest at mental/emotional. I need to work on social 

Joy stand for being happy. 

Family for my mum dad and my sisters.

Minecraft for all the fun I have with my friends in minecraft .

Dog and cat for my pets.

The friends for my the fun time i have with them.

what makes you happy?

Pollution is a problem!!

 this week for target writing short paragraph this is my one

 

what is your opinion on pollution? 

why school should pay us kids

 this week for school we wrote Persuasive writing this is my one

do you agree with me?

Emotional Literacy

 this week for PBL we did Emotional Literacy Emotional Literacy this is the definition The first step to developing empathy is emotional literacy, or the ability to read or recognise your own emotions and the emotions of others so that you can figure out what they are feeling. Emotional literacy is noticing what other people are feeling.

What makes you happy or sad ? 

Tagret writing

This week for target writing we did sentence types these are my one.  

1. The boy, who was only seven, could play the piano.

2. The beach, which was very crowded, was hotter than ever.

3. The ball, which was kicked by the goalkeeper, flew through the air.

4. The music, which was too loud, gave me a headache.

5. The old lady, who had lots of bags, waited for a taxi.

6. The bus, which was empty, sped down the street.

1. The music, which was too loud, gave me a headache.

2. The old lady, who had lots of bags, waited for a taxi.

3. The bus, which was empty, sped down the street.

4. The loaf of bread, which she bought last week, was moldy.

5. The singer, who was on the stage, sang to the audience.

4. The child,who was lost, was crying in the supermarket.

5. The aeroplane,which was full of passengers, was landing at the airport.

6. The people,who were pushing and shoving  queued to buy a bargain.

1. The music ,was blasted so loud it, gave me a headache.

2. The astronaut, quickly, climbed into the space rocket.

3. The ants, who were fast at building there, built their colony.

4. The elderly man, who was 78, struggled across the road.

5. The rainbow, what was so big it, stretched across a cloudless sky. 

What did you think?

Target writing

this week for target writing we made complex sentence.

 

the dog slept even thought it was on the road. Was my sentences

Do you like it?