writing wk 4&5

 This week for writing we have gotten comments on ours for help this was my comment.

I have add more to ideas, But I could not find a quote.  

Do you know anything that I could add ?

peace drawing

This week for reading we did peace drawing, I am strongest at mental/emotional. I need to work on social 

Joy stand for being happy. 

Family for my mum dad and my sisters.

Minecraft for all the fun I have with my friends in minecraft .

Dog and cat for my pets.

The friends for my the fun time i have with them.

what makes you happy?

Pollution is a problem!!

 this week for target writing short paragraph this is my one

 

what is your opinion on pollution? 

why school should pay us kids

 this week for school we wrote Persuasive writing this is my one

do you agree with me?